Storyline Suggestion Example Depth Revision.

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Hi, Valentino_Vaulkan here again!

Guess what tuh'day is? 11/23/2013. Its not complicated, its simple.

Ok, this is basically an more indepth take on the EXAMPLE in Storyline Suggestion.

I recently heard my idea was taken into consideration, possibly accepted. Since this is the case, here are some suggestions on that suggestion. SUGG-CEPTION. Get it? Like, Suggestion Inception? Cause its a Suggestion in a suggest--...No? You didn't watch it. Oh. OK.

Well, lets get started. It will be ordered by "Orderation of Businessations."

Order of Business 1

The filler name is Resotta, by the way. Choose any name you see fit. I prefer Resotta.

Order of Business 1. The Base of Resotta. I feel the perfect place for this is somewhere in Bone County, where there are outlying but very large buildings. If it is up to me, and most likely, it will be, I would INSIST on the base being in this area. A secret base in the city seems just stupid to me. And I insist, do NOT make the main base Area 69. I suggest one of the Colleges, like Greenglass College. I insist one of the colleges 100%.


Order of Business 2

It is preferred Police know about the Resotta. Basically, Resotta is a LEGAL faction, with diplomatic immunities, just like policemen. Only Resotta does whatever they please. Whatever they please WITHIN common sense. So they don't drive around like maniacs driving over people and red lights. Also, Resotta should have access to the skin id's of the following: id 163 and id 164. These are men in suits. If anyone knows the ID's for women in suits, let those be accessible too.

Order of Business 3

All Resotta should be issued only two weapons: The Desert Eagle and the Assault Rifle. Nothing Else. In cases of Martial Law, IF IT COMES TO THIS, all personnel are to be issued Securicar Vehicles, and higher classmen should be issued tanks.

Order of Business 4

Now, my favorite  part. In cases of mass recruition, all new personnel will go through good ol' TRAINING! Training will consist of: Vehicle Tutorials, Escort Training, Stance Training, Investigation Training, and Initiation Testing.

Vehicle Tutorials
Trainees will learn the different types of vehicles to be used and when to use them.

Escort Training
Trainees will put Vehicle Tutorials to the test and utilize two SUVs and a Securicar in an Escort.

Stance Training
Pending

Investigation Training
Trainees will learn how to tail targets and effectively neutralize them. They will learn basics of communication and interrogation techniques.

Initiation Testing
This is an interview.

Also, I suggest replacing the "Government" with this. You don't have to, but it would create more complications should you decide to leave it as is.

Thank you for your time! This has been ANOTHER Valentino Posting!

I will see you in the next post!

Forgot to add:

By Executive Position, I meant in Resotta. Gotta get something out of putting my heart into my ideas, right?